Firstly, I have to go to Africa and see the animals.
Secondly, this is amazing I love it here.
Thirdly, I like hippos now because there big.
Now, I am awesome because I have seen a hippo.
Outside, I saw a big Elephant it was huge.
Gracefully, an eagle was flying through the air and flew through a cloud.
Now, I have to go back home on the plane.
well, I'm back home now and with my dogs.
Wednesday, 20 May 2020
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Awesome work. I like the way in which you have linked your sentences together with the theme of travelling to Africa. Don't forget to check your sentences though and try to use a different adverb to start each one.
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