Friday, 22 June 2018

Mystery Narrative

The mystery of the Missing couple. Have you ever solved a mystery well if you have here's another one. Once upon a time there was a broken down house across the lake. There yous to be a couple who lived there than one day they were gone never to be seen again. So I'm trying to find out what happened that day. Just saying my name is coal fire and i’m going over there to the house tomorrow. Next day I've gone to the police station because I can’t go over to that house alone. The policeman has told me that they are bringing their dog called Bruno over to the house.

 We get down to the lake and an old boat was in the water so we took the boat a cross to the broken house. When we got to the end of the lake we hopped of the boat and left it there. Behind the house was beautiful bush. Than I saw something gloaming in the bush. Then when the policeman looked the gloaming stopped. The policeman took the led off Bruno and Bruno started sniffing up to the house. The policeman went up to the door were the dog was sitting and smashed the door open with a loge we went inside. There were a lot of spider webs. behind the house was a bridge and behind the bridge was a track that just kept on going so the policeman and I went on the walk and by the time we came back it was pich black so we set up a camp I said”I do not want to sleep out in the cold and wetness all night” so the policeman said angrily”go and sleep in the haunted house then if you don't want to sleep out here.

 After that I went quite. Next day Bruno was gone and he wasn't coming back to our campsite. 2 hours Bruno was still gone. Then the policeman shouted out’’Bruno's here and he’s got something in his mouth” I ran over to Bruno and got a package out of his mouth I opened the package and there was a letter inside I read the letter it said. Howl there was a wolf nearby the policeman said”get into the house now I’ll try and shoot the wolf”.I ran into the house and ran up stairs I saw the wolf it was on the other side of the house. Then I heard some shots happening. I saw Bruno run after the wolf and then it went silent for a moment. The policeman shouted” the wolf is in the house with you shout the door”. I shout the door I heard the wolf come up stairs then it knocked down the door I screamed. But it was just Bruno. the wolf ran out of the door and went back into the bush. I was up all night trying to figure out what the letter was about. The next day I went over to the policeman and woke him up. “Cole what are you doing” " I figured out what the letter said" " it said" dear peter me and Steven are running away.

We have to go somewhere else. there is a wolf and it is stoking as around the house. so we are trying to run down to the lake and swim away. Peter it is coming into the house I love you son bye. So there we have it the mystery is almost solved". “ almost solved Iv been here two nights almost getting killed from a wolf” said the policeman then I ran upstairs went to the room we haven't gone into . There was no door and I saw blood on the ground then the policeman came into the room he said “ is our mystery don know” I think so. The next day let’s go home now. we pack our gear and go to where the boat was. there was leak  and some scratches from the wolf. what are we going to do now Coal. I don’t know. Then we heard voices in the bush a couple came out. I said is that them the couple who we thought was dead”. yes I think so “ said the policeman” what are you two doing here “ said the man”. say something Coal . and I Said it’s you Steven and what is your name lady. my name is Bella “ I said let’s go back to the other side of the lake before the wolf comes back. 2 minutes later.” I think the boat is holding all of us up “ said the policeman” were here” said Bella. “ Coal fire it has been an honour serving with you” said the policeman the mystery is finished now a said the policeman. yes it is or is it just the beginning. The end

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