The Best Friend - By Cam
Once there was a 14 year old boy called Charlie. He lived in an old barn house. He had blond hair and blue shorts with a white top that had turned brown. For over a year he was waiting for his best friend called Max. Max had brown hair with black cloths.
So on Monday Charlie set off to find Max.
Charlie was walking for 5 hours until he got to some mountains. Charlie new that Max had been through here because before Max had left he said” I was going into the mountains“. Charlie climbed up a little cliff. But lost his footing and fell into a little creek and was unconscious floating down the creek with his head under the water. The water was freezing because it was came from the snow in the mountains.
Charlie woke up out of the water, freezing. A golden dog had saved him. But Charlie got up and was quite frightened of it. But the dog came close a snuggled down next to Charlie to keep him warm. They both fell asleep. After awhile they woke up and were pretty warm the next morning. Charlie got up and got some blue berry's for breakfast. Charlie started walking again but this time with the dog that he named Orea.
they both walked up and down up and down. before they got to the top of a mountain to find Max. He was eating a male dead deer. Charlie and Max ran at each other before both hugging, they both were about to cry. But there was an earthquake hit and Max fell off the mountain and Orea and Charlie were both nocked off there feet.
After two days Charlie had almost given up. But finally found Max. Charlie ran over to Max. But Max didn’t move he was probably dead. By getting pummelled by a big brown rock. Charlie and Orea went back home to were all off this had started. Charlie was really depressed and didn’t want to do anything. But one night Orea started barking his head off. Charlie got up and let Orea outside to see what the thing was. Orea went sprinting into the bush and was in there for awhile. Charlie got worried that Orea wasn’t coming back then he would be properly alone. But Charlie heard a sound in the bush Orea had brought out Max. He was still alive and in pretty good shape too. Just a couple bruises and some scratches. Max, Charlie and Orea were all together from now on. Until one day someone was lying on the ground maybe dead. The End.
Charlie was walking for 5 hours until he got to some mountains. Charlie new that Max had been through here because before Max had left he said” I was going into the mountains“. Charlie climbed up a little cliff. But lost his footing and fell into a little creek and was unconscious floating down the creek with his head under the water. The water was freezing because it was came from the snow in the mountains.
Charlie woke up out of the water, freezing. A golden dog had saved him. But Charlie got up and was quite frightened of it. But the dog came close a snuggled down next to Charlie to keep him warm. They both fell asleep. After awhile they woke up and were pretty warm the next morning. Charlie got up and got some blue berry's for breakfast. Charlie started walking again but this time with the dog that he named Orea.
they both walked up and down up and down. before they got to the top of a mountain to find Max. He was eating a male dead deer. Charlie and Max ran at each other before both hugging, they both were about to cry. But there was an earthquake hit and Max fell off the mountain and Orea and Charlie were both nocked off there feet.
After two days Charlie had almost given up. But finally found Max. Charlie ran over to Max. But Max didn’t move he was probably dead. By getting pummelled by a big brown rock. Charlie and Orea went back home to were all off this had started. Charlie was really depressed and didn’t want to do anything. But one night Orea started barking his head off. Charlie got up and let Orea outside to see what the thing was. Orea went sprinting into the bush and was in there for awhile. Charlie got worried that Orea wasn’t coming back then he would be properly alone. But Charlie heard a sound in the bush Orea had brought out Max. He was still alive and in pretty good shape too. Just a couple bruises and some scratches. Max, Charlie and Orea were all together from now on. Until one day someone was lying on the ground maybe dead. The End.
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