Friday, 9 August 2019

Darold and the Monster

Darold and the Monster 

 Once there was a hero called Darold, he was 14 years old. He lived in an old village in a old barn. But about a week ago a monster escaped. Darold flew into a jungle surround by animals where the monster was. For weeks he couldn’t find the monster. For awhile he began to think that the monster wasn’t there. Darold got suddenly hit on the head and went unconscious. He was getting dragged into a cave. After about 10 minutes Darold finally woke up and in his face there was the ugly monster he had been searching for a weeks. Darold gets up kicks the monster in the belly and maks a run for it. He goes through the cave into the open were there was a grassy field. The monster ran after Darold clutching his belly. 

 They went to each side of the field and stopped for a second before running at each other. But the monster stopped so Darold stopped too. The monster started peeling of his ugly skin and Darold was grossed out. When the monster finally finished peeling off his skin Darold looked and it was a young boy like himself. The boy shouted across the field. “you are my brother, Darold”. Darold ran over to his brother and they hugged for a bit. Until his brother changed colour and into the monster he once was, and Darold was swallowed by the monster. The End By Campbell

3 comments:

  1. Hi Cam
    Im Ethan in your class It is really long and I am looking ford to other one. Bye

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  2. thank Ethan I know were you are............ right next to me. hahahahha

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