Thursday, 18 June 2020

THE FOREST BABY

1 comment:

  1. Wow, you have written a great follow up paragraph to the story, although it is incredibly sad that the baby died! One thing to remember is to check your punctuation. Don't forget if someone asks a question, you need the question mark as well as the speech marks.

    You have also written a great description of what your rabbit trap would do - it would be great to have a diagram that shows this also.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that  lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.

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