Friday, 5 June 2020
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Hi, Cam. Great work. I like that you were able to retell the story of the Vampire Bat. I wonder if you could add to this, by writing the next paragraph in the story, explaining what happened when the bat got back to the cave (remember the story was a fiction one that ended when the bat flew back to the cave).
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